ENG 162, Creative non fiction writing.
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I mean you could have a single vignette about being on the stairs or on the roof (that section is probably a vignette) but right now, it's unfocused and shaggy.
Okay. I'll give the re-write a shot. Thank you for the feedback.
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ReplyDeleteI mean you could have a single vignette about being on the stairs or on the roof (that section is probably a vignette) but right now, it's unfocused and shaggy.
ReplyDeleteOkay. I'll give the re-write a shot. Thank you for the feedback.
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